Show don't tell

I walk into a little boutique and I am looking in the cases, all holding astonishing items. The light hits this one piece at the right angle and catches my eye. I immediately ask to try it on. I slide it on my finger and it is a perfect fit. Right then I knew I needed to buy it. It rang up to be twenty-eight dollars. I wear it everyday and within the first day everyone was complimenting me on its shiny silver band that binds the stones together. It is now beginning to get worn and roughed up but, still each morning after my shower I slide its band back onto my finger.